First names don't take titles. Use the surname with titles like Mr., Ms., Dr., etc.
The adverb much is usually used in questions and negative sentences. Use a lot of in affirmative sentences.
The word presentation is a noun. The verb is present.
The noun advice is uncountable and does not take the plural s. Instead, use the counter, which is piece. The same applies to the uncountable noun information.
The word there is an adverb and is not preceded by the preposition to. The same applies to these words: here, somewhere, everywhere, shopping, downtown, upstairs, downstairs, and home.
And here's a final reminder: 10-week plans are due on Friday the 9th and Wednesday the 14th. Details, details, details!